Very good. I like it. I remember back when I was on meds and how they made me feel, and how people made me feel while I was on them. Keep up the good work. Though I hope you find a better place. Peace.

I like it ... great poem. I also suggest adding commas, but I think the punctuation it really needs is question marks at the end of every verse. You have one in the first, but the others need it too.

Keep writing.

-LoL

Loved the way you rhymed it out. I really liked this part:

If I wear my life on my sleeve
In hope that someday someone will understand
Why does my life
Never go as I planned

But the only thing I suggest is adding periods and commas. It doesn't really make a difference, it's probably just me. lol, overall it's a great poem.