Awesome first chapter. You really paint a vivid image with your words and even though a lot of this chapter is dialoge, so much is conveyed. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing, k.

Hi! Of course I remember you, but it's been way too long! It'd be more than happy to read your latest work ... but as I might have told you before, I don't know too much about fantasy writing. I have been reading a friend's fantasy story, though (He's under the penname "ABoredAsian" under my favorites list and would appreciate feedback if you get ever a chance ...) and I've begun to really enjoy that genre of writing!

Anyway, great introduction ... it looks like this is going to be a really awesome story and I can't wait to keep reading. It's good to hear from you again. Keep writing, k.