wow...you gota soak this one in...it iz beautiful

I love your writing.

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I like that this can be applied to life in general, because it makes it seem like anyone could relate to this, if not on the same level you were thinking. I didn't get a sense of rhythm from this, though, which I didn't like so much because this read sort of like prose in poetry form, instead of a poem.