Hey there!!

Just started reading your story yesterday (for no reason i can think of other than MEGA MEGA procrastination xD) but finished it today (i'll admit i fell asleep in the middle, but because i'm exhausted, not because it's boring!)

Now on to the actual review (:

Your story is hilarious. It's kept me smiling almost all the way through (except for the sad, frustrating, tense bits etc xD) and there were occasional LOL moments. So kudos on that!

Secondly, your story is real! I know some people hate the diary format and so on, but you really, really did it spectacularly. I could swear that this diary represents all of us teenage girls (with mild differences in characters, i s'pose xD) but it's interesting and at the same time you've put such a cool spin on the basic life. It's believable and its GOOD. Also, you mention some stuff that normally other authors of this sort of writing either give up on halfway or just never mention (i.e, throwing up, the acne (lmao, that made me laugh, i think like that every time i get a zit!), the whole Nick thing (i really like how he didnt turn out to be good looking yet Alexis liked him anyway...), her cousin dying, all that jazz.)

Oh ... and i loved, loved, loved Roberta and Herbert's story xD
And the whole Demise of Moth cont. thing xD

Now about the writing: You write brilliantly. i don't know how you do in other genres, but as far as this one goes you're as good as, if not better than, Meg Cabot (y'know ... Diaries/Princess Diaries? xD Only example i could think of.) There were very few spelling/grammatical errors - I HATE THAT - and your style is very good. You ramble a bit, but that just adds to the realism of it, doesnt it? At any rate, i thought it was good. So great job!

Only criticism: Sometimes, instead of doing the multiple bracket thing (Which i just did (so i'm being hypocritical here, even though it's your fault for making me do it!))

Okay, I've been reading this for a while and I got to this chapter just before my mom comes and tells me she needs to use the computer. Even though I know she's just looking for a job because she hates Barnes n Noble and she hates kids, and she just so happens to work in the Children's department. So I have to get off the computer now. Yay.
Anyways. I really enjoy reading this! It's very fun and I love it!
And...I have to get off the computer now before my mom starts scolding me...

holy crap you almost stole my entire name :O

Regardless, I like the story. Very nice :)

I've got gadgets and gizmos a-plenty
I've got whozits and whatzits galore
You want thingamabobs?
I've got twenty!...

Huh. As you may be able to tell, I have the slightest fixation with disney songs at the moment. You know, just to an obsessive level.


Anyhoo, your story is fairly amusing, and I just wanted to let you know that you have another fan.

Good chapter.

I -- damn. Well... **. I, ah, read this twice. And liked it more and more as it progressively ninja'd my brain. I deff feel for Lex, and the next time I have a compulsive need to eat someone's face, I'll remember my company -_-' DARK PLACES = STD'S! According to my less mentapausal theology teacher, at least.

Cha, well, I've a date at the YMCA, so I'll leave the review at this. I'm sure you'll hear my thoughts one time or another =]

Oh my, how dissapointing... oh well, at least it's not like Jess's grope-fest in the corner.

AH! SOMEONE WHO SHARES A LOVE FOR THE 'PRINCE OF PERSIA' TRILOGY.

Okay, for me, it's not love. It's an obsession. But still.

Love this. : ) Update son.

Good chapter.

Yo hommie.
Short chapter I read whilst eating macaroni.

...I'll stop while I'm ahead...

Er, ANYWAYS. Great character development here. I likey.

My stomach is rebelling against the food (plastic, they LIE) it just discovered. Now that you mention how absolutely disgusting toilets are, I think I'll go find my brother...

~Dango

Good chapter in showing her conflicting feelings about Shawn.

Cha, that spiced up my night. XD

Hmm, love the inner turmoil and insecurities brought out in this chapter. Great character development! =]

X] Usually awkward moments make my dates memorable. Although... crap. Now I have to go reread stuff. This was SO not at the movie theatre... Maybe I thought so because a violent song just started playing and I was distracted? Eh. I don't even know how my mind works.

You have inspired me to write, yessa, you have. I'll prolly only get a para or two done, but hey. It's something.

Actually, I think I'll have to get back to this review later. Jack just walked in my door bearing gifts. What the hell am I going to do with a thong?

~Dango

Oh yay! You finally updated! Yes! Keep it up, girl! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Good chapter.

I just love this story. It's full of sarcastic, witty humor and anticipated romance. =P You've done a great job and I just love Alex. She's wonderful. xD I can't wait for a next one. (I don't mind if you publish a chapter everyday!)