I love this story! :D

LOVE THE STORY..

Woosh, took me awhile to finally get to this. ha ha!

David had already explained everything to Angela, so Clive felt at ease leaving Arial with Angela until the examination was over. David had already explained everything to Angela so Clive felt at ease to leave her there until the examination was over, while he ran back to the bar.

A little repeat there . . .

Seventeen years IS a long time! Holy shiznit! Ha ha, in just four years dani and I will have been best friends for that long. Angela's nicer than I thought she would be. :D

Arial's really mellowed out. haha.

Oh! Is Carol Clive's girlfriend?! O.o
Luke doesn't sound like someone to trust . . . I'm suspicious of him! XD

Aw! Arial's so innocent! I just want to huggle her!

Aww! She's SO cute! "That's a car?" AW! X33 It would be SO easy for someone to kidnap this girl, lol. She's lucky Clive's the one who found her. A bit sexist ne Clive? I read a story once where a naive boy got gang banged. Poor thing. :(

Aah, but it's very possible for a human Clive. XXD not that he would guess her to be that. If someone told me they were an angel I'd slowly reach for the phone . . . lol!

lol! She was 'high'.

I wonder why she can't remember she's an angel . . . maybe she hit her head while falling from heaven lol.

Wow, Clive seems like the type who thinks you're alone in the world. I wonder what happened to make him think that way.

. . . I like to walk around pantsless and barefoot. LOL.

I'm surprised she knows how to take a shower. lol. Aww, he's actually really nice. XXD I like Clive already. Ah ha, a big teddy bear. Aw.

E! Brother love! XXD X33 I LOVE it!!

A girl who can't accept that a guy needs his boy should leave. Ha ha, bro's before hoes! XXD

heheh, loca. I love it when Goerge Lopez says things like that in a weird mexican accent. XXD Clive's a wolf? Wolves are so cute, too bad they aren't tame enough to keep them as pets lol. I like the ones that are gray and white. :O

I wonder if Angela knows about the club.

I don't get how people can sleep with light. lol. Even the tiniest bit of light when I'm trying to sleep annoys me. Sometimes, I'm even weird enough to cover the numbers on my clock and have the shades covering my windows and everything. LOL!

Despite what you say I liked this chapter. :) I can't wait until he finds out she's an angel. XXD

awe :) really good :)

Obviously Ariel is behind the times.. (:

- Lauren

o, I really like this one too. Your ideas are very original and you write them very well. I got a bit confused in the prologue, but only at the beginning, and I guess that is to be expected. Can't wait for you to update!

Ha ha! Walking around in such a skimpy robe. This story's so different from your other stories I've read yet still has you in it. :)

So Luke in this is the same Luke that was the angel yes? Does he remember anything or is he all brain dead like Arial. . . hm. . . time shall tell me.

Clive seems pretty interesting. Is he a man **? lol. Their bar is for prostitutes. . . lovely.

likie the chappie.

MUCH LOVE! SMOOCHES

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Hm...I'm starting to wonder where in the world u come up with these story plots.

Time for me to start experimenting on ur brain MUAHAHAHAHAHH!

Anyways [ pulls self together ]seems pretty good and interesting. I thought u were going to post the other one instead but oh well guess i was wrong.

Try reading it over. Some minor mistakes but if u read it over backwards u can find them.

Ha ha, THANKS! But I'm not Tsubaki anymore, it's Bleeding White Lily. My new nickname is Ai-chan though. XD Or just Ai. Cause in Japanese, there are no L's, so when you write my name you only have A and I which spells Ai. XD Ironically it means 'love' lol but that's a given.

anyway! I'm falling in love with this already! Your stories and plots are so creative, how long does it take to plan all this out? O.o It's beautiful. . .

I'm curious what she found. and yeah, angel life sounds boring lol. at least demons get the excitement of torturing. . . things. . . -clears throat- yeah.

Ah! She's a theif! Stealing's a sin lol. Thou shall not steal. Yeah, just cause I don't believe in it doesn't mean I don't know it. XD They talk about it so damn often.

-dark vador voice- the devil told her to lie. . . curious little children are so adorable. They make you want to give them a lolly pop. lol. it's a weapon! Resistance is futile.

heh heh, little minions. The angels are their duckies. Bunnies. And they keep those bunnies hoppin'. Angel's are like God's dolls, they pull their strings like puppets. lol.

O, she called them out! Evil and wrong aren't always the same. And even so, it's just a self opinion! take that you god worshipers! Gay's not the way, pfft, right.

The council sounds like a bunch of **. If I were her I'd want out of the city. Come chill at the human's cribs. lol I'm so not good at gangster talk. I'm interested in the city's 'secrets' though. O.O they kill angels and experiment on them. . . for some reason that just bounced at me.

Luke? Who's that? Another Angel banished for getting close to the truth or gaining thought?

“For fear that I will help wizen the rest of the angels!”

“Precisely.”

Wow, they just came out and admitted that! GET 'EM! >:D

Rebeling is always fun to read about. XD And awesome. Hippies were rebels once too. ha ha. Wonder what she'll find on Earth. . .

I'm so falling in love with this one! O.O I LOVE IT!

Awesome! It sounds very interesting and exiting, i can't wait to read more and to find out what happens to Arial.