I like this poem a lot, I'm a drum major so originally thats what attracted me to this poem, I'm guessing your a colorguard/flag person? In any case, its a good poem, if a bit scathing towards Drum Majors (I take no offense). Its less flowery language and more real, anyone can create good imagry, but not everyone can infuse it with the emotion they were trying to create, this is a good example of both.

Am I missing something?

oy, so true. So easy to relate to, as well. Your point is clear, your emotions are perfectly described. Good job!
Keep Writing,

-Rachel

And the sad thing is, I get it. Succint, just the right amount of words to get your point across.