I loved this.

Honestly. I've read several poems on this site, but not many of them are review-worthy.

What I've noticed about your poems (though this is only the second I've read) is that they tend to be slightly confusing.

But that makes them amazing poems! The best poems are those that convey an emotion without ever coming out and explaining themselves. They use several images to simply give the reader a certain feeling.

I enjoy your writing!

Always,
breathingsofmyheartxx

Aww.. Ashley... if you were still here, you wouldn't have a crush on either of our DM's. lol.

Its kinda cute though.. kinda how I've been feeling about a certain someone.. [[not our dm's... ]] Ugh. I'll have to tell you about it sometime.