ok... Your summary just kinda captivated me. I wanna try and decipher it! haha.


Whoa... after reading the first stanza, the flow and rhyme makes it seem like it's been revised for years and it's like something I'd find in a book the Greeks wrote of their poetry and literature in the ancient/Classical times...

OMG THAT WAS AWESOME haha.

I'd guess God making the world but i may be biased since I'm Catholic. If not God, then someone's definitely toying with some stuff that is universally found... like I mean making another wrold or something.

Make the changes, back to heaven... Down again and back times seven? ... Why seven? I'm sure it has another reason besides its rhyme right? I mean seven is a pretty... important number in a lot of cultures even though that sounds weird, isn't it? haha I think in Chinese 7 means Heaven... or maybe it was 11 but either way... numbers have meanings =)

Quite interesting, it has some nice flow in it.

Alchemy strives to make all things perfect, to imbue life. It is a bit sad that we live in such a logical society where mysteries have answers and we are told that to strive for something more than comfort is to be greedy.

Nice work, keep writing,
TMO