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midnight84118 2009-10-03 . chapter 5
i was a little confused by this story but gret job
ChristianAngel01 2009-09-18 . chapter 5
whoa that was interesting update!
blooy fangs 2009-08-17 . chapter 5
finish it so i can know what happens neax
Lupita M. 2009-08-13 . chapter 5
AWESOME STORY;)
FreeToDream 2009-08-12 . chapter 5
Ok, I really like it so far, please don't abandon it!! It's really good, and your writing is really good, love it!! DON'T STOP! lol
YRUSTILLHERE 2009-03-09 . chapter 4
I really like this story; this chapter was great! Please continue!
Werwolf234 2009-02-02 . chapter 4
It's an awesome story so far. Can't wait for you to update!

~Raven
PoeticPersonality2012 2009-01-15 . chapter 4
I like it!
I just came across this and it is realy good.

You should update soon.
=)
.static.mind. 2008-12-01 . chapter 4
That was fabulous.
OMG! You have to update soon.
I love the concept of only higher class Vampires drink Human blood.
Backwards werewolf! That is funny and sad, Poor Bryce.
Ok, update soon.
RyAnn Leigh 2008-11-04 . chapter 4
I do like this chapter. I especially like the dialogue, and the witty exchange at the end of the chapter. I also like how we get a little insight to the ways of vampires, such as only the higher vampires can drink human blood or that Daisy has this ability to call the deer to her--and that she doesn't have to kill to eat.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this story is going and to see if there will be an exchange between her and the other vampires.

Keep up the good work!
Feblinhoi-BattlefieldOfTheDead 2008-11-03 . chapter 4
Aw! Thats so cute, and I can see why your beta likes it.
Keep up the good work!
LittleMissKissBang 2008-11-02 . chapter 4
Really cool. Update more! Dying for something to read. Love the heart beat thing. Makes it a little more interesting. But what about the Wellingtons? If the one asked her to marry him then I think he'll come looking for her. Just my opinion anyway. Keep it up and post more soon.
Estelin 2008-10-01 . chapter 3
this is excellent. keep up the good work and writing. can't wait for more.
Aiko-Moon 2008-09-29 . chapter 3
Hmm, well to start I like the idea of the story. But not to be to mean, I kind of perdicted that what happedned was going to happen to her. it's not exactely your tipical vampire/werewolf story, but it has most of the characertistics.

But I like it, I'm actually qutite interested in what will happen between her and Bryce. Keep writing, can't wait to read more.
RyAnn Leigh 2008-09-16 . chapter 3
Very interesting. I would like to know what's going to happen and what happened to Lucus. It seems a great concept and I'm looking forward to more.
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