I like this! It's very suspenseful. Who is this mysterious monster? Why does it want to meet her? Oh, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!

mine was longer before!

Unlike Moe-neeka, I bother to log in for my friends. Which makes me a better person, frankly. Anyway, about the chapter: Well, Audrey's life isn't going to well in this chapter. Stupid note, I wanted to know who it was. And one more thing: her mom is HARSH. ...Although she had a good reason. And in the tradition of fictionpressers everywhere, update soon.
PS... my review was longer! xD

actually, we're not reviewers until we review. anyways, great chapter! suspenseful; i wanted to figure out who it was! >=( that sucks that yur both grounded, though. and i wonder who Todd is...you better post the next chapter soon, or...you know what i'll do!

ps- i'm better than kate! i reviwed before her!

JAIME! This story is super fantastical!! WHO LEFT THE NOTE!?!?!?! Hurry up and post some more, Jaime m'dear!
Amy x

OMG SUSPENSE! amazing chapter! sorry i haven't reviewed but i haven't even had time to read it. now you can post the next chapter!!

anyways, awesome chapter! i really love the ending, where she realizes who it is only at the last line and then her mom comes home! hm, how will she explain? and will she meat up with the monster?

anyways, if i do not see the next chapter up here by the end of the day, i will come to your house, drag you screaming to a cliff, and throw you off. then i'll lock you in an empty room with a computer and not open the door till you post!

ps- Kate...POST! or i will not. that's right people, i'm not posting till Kate posts so go harass her! charge!

In the true Jamesy spirit... dun dun dun!
Haha, nice chapter. I love the small details that make it hilarious. Where can I get one of those Cowboy-With-An-Attitude alarm clocks? And those hideous pajamas?
...So, cliff hanger. Hurry up and post another chapter. And don't give up on this story! (And forget that this command came from the girl who hasn't posted in a month.)

Oh Jaime, you rebel! I loved this chapter! I really hope you update soon! This story is awesome so far!
Oh and sorry about not updating... I've had a lot of homework and other stuff to worry about. Not to mention I have writer's block.
Anywho, UPDATE!

JAIME! Now it is my turn to do the threatening! This is amazing! UPDATE SOON! Or else!

Ohh, this is so good!
Are you continuing this?
PLEASE SAY YES!
Update soon (because you need to!)

cool. creepy person! see this is one thing i just plain suck at: description. anyways, congrats! u posted yur second FP story even though u barely ever post on the first one! interesting beginning, can't wait to see what happens!

P.S.- Kate, how could u not tell it was a dream? yur dumb

wow.
i liked it.. i had to read it twice, to actually understand everythign, so i felt dumb... but i liked it... i look forward to reading more or what you've written because your style is unique ha.

YAY JAMESY! Your second FP story! And it's sci-fi, woot! Good job, I like this one. (Haha not that I don't like your other story) I actually didn't get the fact that it was a dream until the last sentences... ^^"
Decided to use the name Audrey, huh? Let's see, how many names have you stolen yet? lol, kidding... I don't care.