   sarcasm is my middle name 2009-07-19 . chapter 8Nice story... |
 come back to Yesterday 2009-06-28 . chapter 8add to the story i love! it... |
 Initially loaded 2009-06-23 . chapter 8I love it! It gets better and better |
 browneyes33 2009-06-22 . chapter 8I like the attitude of Si, she doesn't take crap from ne 1 and that's a good thing. Also if I was her I would've punched that bitchy cheerleader by now. Also it was wierd that kevin got stabbed just like that. Obviously it was jace cause of the knife thing. Go Si for declaring war. As long as no one else dies and she keeps kicking the guys's asses. I hope she ends up fighting jace and they both figure out who each other is then she kicks his **! |
 Gris bray 2009-06-22 . chapter 8shesh~ i though u wouldnt update at all!
but i am happy u did~ update again soon~ :D |
 Salyl 2009-06-22 . chapter 8yay!
update!
pleasepleaseplease update Falling for Ashes, please. Not saying that I'm not happy for this update.
anyways. :)
I'm super happy you updated, haha. |
 Pinksnowfalls 2009-06-22 . chapter 8Wow, really interesting story idea. I like your character development as well, very vivid. Sienna is very easy to relate with, or at least for me. Although the chapters are a bit short and your sentences are occasionally wordy, nothing too bad though, good job. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
 SHMILY 2009-06-22 . chapter 8 This is a really good read. I hope to see more :) |
 pinkeclipse 2009-06-22 . chapter 8thank you so much for the update! |
| omg omg omg omg 2009-06-06 . chapter 7 come on come on come on come on write write i waant to no what is going to happen like now :P lol |
 Reticence 2009-03-24 . chapter 7Ooh, full out war declared...go Sienna. She's quite an impetuous character, its a good job Alec tries to keep her in check. Perhaps you could describe the characters' appearance a little more? All I really got is that Sienna's 5'9. I'll naturally assume that all the main characters are good-looking ;) although thats pretty much spoken for Jace.
Excellent. Update? |
 StoryAtMidnight 2009-03-20 . chapter 7reviewing... processing... AMAZING! it has street fighting, which i really like, but a new twist on it, which makes it more interesting to read. update soon please! |
 Walkofthecookiemonster 2009-03-16 . chapter 7this was flippin good! me needith more! |
| Kitten-Got-Claws 2009-01-29 . chapter 1 Awesome chapter keep it up but i would like for you to update sooner so you dont leave us hanging but i love it action. At first i hated jace but im starting to like him lol :P |
| Sing-In()Sing-Out 2009-01-27 . chapter 7 OMG I LOVE THIS STORY IT IS SO DIFFERENT FROM EVERY OTHER STORY |
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