It's been a long time since you wrote a poem. I'm saddened honestly. Ever since I found your work, it's inspired me so much... It's just... I wish I can just say, how much I appreciate your work. To give you a warm hug, to show you what I feel. I don't know if you'll ever read this. But you are talented, you write raw, and you bring out the emotions that other's are afraid to feel. I give you all the love in the world for that. Thank you for writing this. I wish you all the best, and all goodluck.

i wish it meant nothing to me :(

There's a lot of meaning inscribed in these few short sentences. Being a lover of ambiguity, I just couldn't resist :)

I love the background that you are alluding to.

Very well written!

nice.

Good ending.

This was absolutely wonderful. So much is said in so few words and at the beginning things seem happy and sweet but then there is a complete change in the tone. & the ending is just lovely with, "“roses are red, darling,” I say, press a

Kiss to her nose, “and violets are blue”" perfect.

it began innocently, then tension builds as the speaker sings discordantly, and it suddenly grips you as the mother screams, then leaves you numb at the end of the song, and yet it's very brief.

i think it's cleverly put together - so much in just a small piece.

keep rockin'.

The contrast of moods in this gives me chills. Very bittersweet and beautiful. Your writing is gorgeous.

its been a while darling.

how have you been? i thought i gave you my email, though most probably wrong. if you still read these reviews, give me a shout out on my profile. i'm thinking of updating soon

take care, and, as always, beautiful poetry.

there's something so sad about this poem :(

I really love the last two stanzas...but i want to know, did you mean to say off-tune? If so, it's really compelling to think about...

so, so gorgeous. i need to drop by more often.

Awh. I think this is stunningly beautiful. It's sad and sweet and it captures your emotion perfectly.

i LOVE this poem! no lie. it was flawless and extremely effective. for some reason i loved this line, "As I sing, off-tune and loud, to her

" perfection. and now i shall add this to my favs:)

This is a really powerful piece. I liked it a lot.