 simpleplan13 2008-09-14 . chapter 1I love the beginning descriptions of people in class, it's so true! I also like the complete exaggeration of things, it's hysterical. You might want to read it over though, some your punctuation in the quotes is wrong and some parts are confusing because you don't separate different people talking. Other than that nice write.
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