That was a really good poem =D
for your age, you write exceptionally.
i just loved the poem in particular,
great job :D
(i can't comment with an account, cause i havent made one)

O. M. G. this is AMAZING! i love this!

i love your writing style & your poem.
i just recently began writing poetry for fictionpress. it would mean the world to me if you could read & review my work.
feedback from a writer like you would be so great!

thank you so much
and again, great work.