They are super cute.

Like... vampire... cute.

Yep. I have nothing to go off on that other than they are cute and I just want to hug them.
Not when they are naked though.

Whoa. Have you ever watched yourself type? It is odd. I am doing it right now and it is strange.

ARI-CHAN It's been so long! Sorry I just had time to R&R for various reasons. Oh FINALLY some "scenes" hehe ^^. Aww Ally is still unsure of his feelings.

Somehow I should have expected that kiss from Terry.

Wow That's on heck of a christmas present, where can I get one? DO they sell that at wal mart or something? lol

Wow they finally did it!

And yay for this chapter. I loved it.

Thanks fo updating.

Cheers,

- Ace

ZOMFG... OO -nosebleeds and passes out- X w X The love making!! FINally! >w

Hahahahahahahaha- Brandt, you silly ´girl´. You are aware that it´s a present because it´s SECRET right? Right? I bet he´s the kind of guy who snoops and tries to find the prezzies before he gets to open them. You know, I´d love to see a moment or two between him and Kristen sometime soon. The pair of them is so sweet.

GO ARMAND!

I applaud thee for being so damned patient! Most others would probably have forced darling Ally into their bed weeks, if not months ago. And he went about it in such a natural, totally unashamed way -sigh- Like it wasn´t something HUGELY important, XD. Their rendezvous was sweet more than it was hot, which is good, because I think some experimenting is needed before any beginner can have hot, mouth watering sex :P
And I´m sure Armand will give it to him, hm? My only teensy complaint is that it was a little short, but that´s just my inner lemon craze talking.

Not in love yet, Ally, but you are pretty much on the verge of it. I´ll laugh when he finally realizes it.

ps: I barked with laughter when Eve was sitting on the edge of the tub. That was so...I think that might have been the best moment in the whole chapter, sorry.

-the wifey

This chapter made me go all mushy. I am so glad that Ali decided to give himself to Armand and I am excited to see how everyone likes there gifts. Anyways keep up the good work.

GR... Armand needs 2 b brought down like 80 steps or 2... Gr he makes me so ANGRY! I mean... i like him but i still think he should TOTALY b taken down and showed that hes an idiot... preferably by Alister! hehe im going to go back 2 reading lol i NEVR review in the middle of a story! i usualy wait for the end...

I want to start off by telling you that I love your writing and I think, after some conversations on SRA/email/etc, that you're also a great person. I want you to know that I've been faithfully following Breathtaken since chapter five, I think, when you PMed me with it's info, and I even helped you pick the current title, since you didn't like Twilight Moon. I guess the purpose of mentioning all that is so you know that I'm not trying to be offensive. I still love this story, obviously, but I don't really like this chapter. It was weak and seemed to be mostly focused on answering that review rather than flowing into the next part.

[Moving on, though, the next thing I dislike is the way Alister is treated just like that--a kitten, an animal, one not considered to be on the same level, intellectually or otherwise, with his owners.] ["You do know I'm not your pet, right? That I'm just sort of...a person who puts up with you, if only because of an addiction, right? You're like...catnip or something, meaning...oh, that makes me the cat. Nevermind. Anyway, the point is I'm not your pet, like I said at the beginning of this rambling.”] This chapter doesn't flow so well. You just randomly start up with this sentence after the beginning, which was okay. It seemed to have randomly popped up, instead of coming in naturally - what I'm trying to say is, it sounds tense. [The first thing that I'm talking about is how he seems to come to the decision that he loves Alister based on his physical appearance and not even the knowledge that his "kitten's" original purpose was to aid in his assassination.] [“My beautiful, beautiful Alister Rowan. Everything you've been...your defiance, your intelligence and sarcasm, your unfathomably attractive mouth and every other thing you are. Not a pet. A lover.”] This whole section and the rest is so...awkward. I'm sorry, but I feel that you shouldn't put so much stock into reviews. Sure, everyone wants their reviewers to like them, but damn, not *everyone* will like you, and you have to live with that. The best authors in the world have critics and you shouldn't change *everything* because of a critic. You'll still have those who love your work, like me. I would have loved to read whatever you had planned, even if you didn't touch on all the topics you did this chapter. I would have patiently waited for you to go with the flow, as it's said. What I'm trying to say is, you're trying way too hard to please everyone, but it just diminishes your original writing level. I might be the only one who mentions this, but I'm not the only one who thinks so. I was talking with my friend - who I convinced to read this in the first place - and she found this chapter awkward and confusing, too.

The killer was also a little anti-climactic. It was too sudden. I mean, I'm a fan of crime dramas, so maybe I'm expecting too much, but you could have drawn it out. I'm sorry, I know it sounds as if I'm being too critical with this chapter, but I really love this story, you know I do, but I've read too many stories that started out as a powerful river and trickled down to a pitiful stream. Don't let this be one of them. I'd much rather you take *months* to update, then to jumble everything together suddenly. Slow and steady wins the race, you know? Again, I'm sorry if I sound too harsh, but that's just my opinion.

GAH! Haha I almost feel bad for Terry, Almost. I loved how you had him kiss Alister and then get grabbed. I thought it was funny. Its so cute how close Alister and Armand have gotten! OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter.

omg. moremoremoremoremoremore!
I LOVE your twists!!

So very good! Loved this one! My only concern was the lame excuse Alaric gave... seems fishy!

LOL anyways, great work!

Ohoho, the plot is thickening! Your scruffy, mad bloke was fun! I'm curious (like everyone else) what the whole deal with skinning the victims is about. A weird fetish, perhaps? I guess we'll find out sooner or later since they are in L.A. already.

Brandt made me laugh with the whole "Oh yeah, if the two of you are gonna suck face again, count me out." Except he didn't say it quite like that. The poor bloke, it must be annoying for him when they get started with the molesting and all.

I wish Terry had a bigger part in the story- he sounds like a sweet kid (more so after the big reunion kiss).

I'm voting for some lime or molesting without clothes soon, love. Will we have that anytime soon? :P

- K.

I love this story but I have to admit that the killer was a bit disappointing. Maybe I watched a little too many criminal tv shows. I was expecting him to be more of a chalange.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow!

I just read all of this and it was exquisite!
Really great!

I lovedd the whole possessive vampire/pet thing, now that makes me seem like a perv but whatever XD it's really bloody hot!

wait- XD ignore the irony there plzkthnx

Anyways!
This is really cute and I can't wait for an update! It's awesome how it's meant to be a very dominant/submissive relationship, but the one who's submissive has A LOT of power, possibly just as much~ I really enjoy how you write that (:

Alister is really so smitten XD it's ver ver ver cute and amusing~

All in all this fic is so good/awesome/great/magnificent/etc~
SO I HOPE YOU UPDATE REAL SOON!
Because not updating since JULY is an abomination!
It's a shame to leave such a epic fic unfinished *emotear*
SO! I hope you post a new chapter real soon ^-^

SO UPDATE SOON!
PREFERABLY, MOAR RIGHT NAO!

I know I've repeated in telling you to update multiple times in this chapter, I just hope it makes it sink in more...or something...(:

plzkthnxbai
-Henrietta