Good job... I wish that person you're refering to would love you back.. for you to sacrifice some of your time to write this, you must really love him... I've felt how feel...

Can I say aw? This totally describes what I'm going through, though there's new evidence he may like me back. Definately what's happening to my friend. Her crush deosn't know, but he flat out told her who he liked, and it isn't her.

This is personal.. but really easy to relate to. Unfortunately we've all felt this way _

I loved the insanity lurking out in this piece, everything written seems very natural and desperate.. Good structure and presentation, setting its own pace.

Good luck, is all I can say o_O

fleur

I know how you feel... Good poem! :)