dis is super coollllllllll i love it over nd out (:

That was great! I especially loved how she didn't make him into a better person, she just reminded him of the person he used to be. I also love how you made them boyfriend/girlfriend without the whole dates, questioning, and awkward stuff in between. They're just together :D

Well, this was a great one-shot and I really enjoyed reading it :D

This was very nice - a good read - and very entertaining.

I LOVE THIS BECAUSE OF REASONS.

You don't know how much I relate to this and how much I'm afraid of being a 'just' person. Ugh. I can't really put into words what I'm thinking right now which sucks because it makes so much sense in my head. So yeah before I get sappy, thank you for writing this.

Love the idea of "just" guys! Hate the fact that I might be becoming a "just" girl though, so thank you for opening my eyes :)

I read your story and at the bottom there was an ad for ties. Just had to laugh :)

Aww, I like it! I never thought about 'just' guys before, but that's some thought ]

Oh, I lovelove this story! Theo's character voice is just so fresh I couldn't help but love him after the first sentence. You've successfully expressed the morale of the story through Theo, Avery, and their relationship. I loved Avery's character. She embodies the saneness found in those conglomerate scary-places that Theo almost lost himself in. Their match was portrayed very nicely. Your writing style is such a lovely read, and I found myself smiling through reading this. It's just the thing I needed after being drained with school and work. Your first two lines got me. Seriously. Then I read the rest and the rest's well . . . being horribly expressed in this review, haha.

Great job!

Ha, I really liked it! A just guy...nice analogy. :) And Avery? Best Character ever!

I clicked on this one right after reading the quotes on your profile and I love how you adapted the quote. It worked wonderfully as a prompt and you made it your own. The characters were fun, quirky, and easy to relate to. Very real. It was a fun read, and I think the coffee/tea detail was a great addition to being "just". I don't know- I just loved when Theo asked for the tea selection. I could totally picture Avery's face. Thanks (again!) for the great read!

I really liked this one. It was special. Very thought-provoking.

Loved it.

Awesome work )

Great story. Very well written and a really great idea. ...and probably the first time I've seen my own name (Avery) used in writing :)

Very nice story. I loved the feel of it. Good job! :)

I like it, it really has meaning! You really have a thing for one-shots, don't you?

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