|Reviews for Just|
| heal me forever 9/12/12 . chapter 1
dis is super coollllllllll i love it over nd out (:
| loveofallthatisawesome 8/16/12 . chapter 1
That was great! I especially loved how she didn't make him into a better person, she just reminded him of the person he used to be. I also love how you made them boyfriend/girlfriend without the whole dates, questioning, and awkward stuff in between. They're just together :D
Well, this was a great one-shot and I really enjoyed reading it :D
| heytherehoyhoy 7/2/12 . chapter 1
This was very nice - a good read - and very entertaining.
| mussed 5/22/12 . chapter 1
I LOVE THIS BECAUSE OF REASONS.
You don't know how much I relate to this and how much I'm afraid of being a 'just' person. Ugh. I can't really put into words what I'm thinking right now which sucks because it makes so much sense in my head. So yeah before I get sappy, thank you for writing this.
| wasabi-angel 11/23/11 . chapter 1
Love the idea of "just" guys! Hate the fact that I might be becoming a "just" girl though, so thank you for opening my eyes :)
| Aslin17 8/6/10 . chapter 1
I read your story and at the bottom there was an ad for ties. Just had to laugh :)
| WishBlade 4/20/10 . chapter 1
Aww, I like it! I never thought about 'just' guys before, but that's some thought ]
| Lyssa O 4/13/10 . chapter 1
Oh, I lovelove this story! Theo's character voice is just so fresh I couldn't help but love him after the first sentence. You've successfully expressed the morale of the story through Theo, Avery, and their relationship. I loved Avery's character. She embodies the saneness found in those conglomerate scary-places that Theo almost lost himself in. Their match was portrayed very nicely. Your writing style is such a lovely read, and I found myself smiling through reading this. It's just the thing I needed after being drained with school and work. Your first two lines got me. Seriously. Then I read the rest and the rest's well . . . being horribly expressed in this review, haha.
| Artume 1/5/10 . chapter 1
Ha, I really liked it! A just guy...nice analogy. :) And Avery? Best Character ever!
| Noni Veritas 8/3/09 . chapter 1
I clicked on this one right after reading the quotes on your profile and I love how you adapted the quote. It worked wonderfully as a prompt and you made it your own. The characters were fun, quirky, and easy to relate to. Very real. It was a fun read, and I think the coffee/tea detail was a great addition to being "just". I don't know- I just loved when Theo asked for the tea selection. I could totally picture Avery's face. Thanks (again!) for the great read!
| Frozen.by.Sloth 5/27/09 . chapter 1
I really liked this one. It was special. Very thought-provoking.
| annoyance 4/24/09 . chapter 1
Awesome work )
| abcras 3/8/09 . chapter 1
Great story. Very well written and a really great idea. ...and probably the first time I've seen my own name (Avery) used in writing :)
| aurora borealis 2/18/09 . chapter 1
Very nice story. I loved the feel of it. Good job! :)
| Silencia 1/24/09 . chapter 1
I like it, it really has meaning! You really have a thing for one-shots, don't you?