|Reviews for Pandora's Jewelry Box|
| from beneath the bell jar 11/19/08 . chapter 1
That was pretty much kickass. I've never seen a Pandora poem done this way and it was amazing. Great idea. Loved the ending with Prometheus as well. Lovely! Maybe you could check out one of my new poems "star swallower" or "siren song"? I would definitely appreciate the feedback.
| Aslan Israel 8/19/08 . chapter 1
Something about this really struck me.. I can't quite put my finger on it. It seems you said everything that needed to be said.
'Pandora opened the box, damned if she cared.'
I love that repetition.