This was a really good story. I liked it, but why was it rated M? Just curious. :)

This was shorter then I expected but I enjoyed it.

You really need to check your spelling. I caught a bunch of mistakes. I really liked your quote at the end though.

... Wow. I really want to get into reenacting now. Thanks Lee for this amazing insight! The quote at the end is absolutely perfect for your account. Nice job.

Wow, Lee, this was AMAZING! Excellent use of words, and no grammatical/spelling errors to speak of! *pays homage*