This is so good! Are you ever going to finish it?

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...erm... eh.. please update soon?:) *pleading puppydog eyes*

..like, now? :D
Taylor = Yummy!:P
Mal = Not bad either

Looking forward to the next chap. The charachters are weird and lovable. - Can't wait to read more about them!

So GO! Go write chapter three! GO, GO, GO! *waving pom-poms*

I love the fact you have jumped right into the story and not dragged it out like some.

Oh, damn you, such a cruel way to end a chapter, I need to know what happens damn it all, hehehehe.
JM

They kissed! ** Update please))

Nice chap.

Good story so far--hope you update soon! :)

i cant wait for next chapter please post it soon.

OMG. this story is freaking awesome! UPDATE SOON PLEASE :]

sara x

This. Is. AMAZING. I love your characters (especially Malachi =D ). Can't wait to see how this goes!~Celestial Songbird

OH! Love this story! It's so good!

Oh gosh this is great! I just finished chapter 1. I really like the way you've built your characters. But who's the romance between? I'm confused now. Also, I really like how intelligently and fluent your writing style is. Good job! ^_^

Short but very, very funny. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter! And not just for the kiss at the end. It was amusing and beautifully written, and I'm only hoping you update soon!

Wow cliffy much? This story so far seems like it's moving a little fast, like there's a fair bit of moodswinging going on for only the first two chapters and how sometimes things don't seem to flow quite right...but only sometimes. The rest of the time it cracks me up. =)

Interesting beginning. I love the narrator's voice, and I can't wait to see where you go with this.