Ok so normally I am not into Yaoi, like at all. But the way you did it was so effortless and it didn't seem like some fan girls fantasy come to life. Then again this isn't . But I would like to congratulate you on a job like magnificently done. And trust me I don't normally say that like ever. Again bravo.
Sorry, couldn't finish. The fact that my brain was reading it in your voice made me stop. Sorry, I tried, but you + anything sex-related equals weirdness. I enjoyed what I read, though. And the little Count of Monte Cristo at the end.