So the mama hated Ella because she stole the father from her? That's how I interpreted it lol. I wonder what kind of dreams were stolen...Also cinderella doesn't seem to be very popular these days, is she? haha. mostly stories from the sister's point of view. Cool beans though, I really love your descriptions when writing things. Devil Blue Eyes. Yes.

I really liked this!! I love the developement of the characters, and how the fear of her sister comes back even though she died. Great job!!

This is so angst-y. I think I adore it. You've done a really interesting job of depicting your characters and you used very good descriptions. For it being so short, it's made a large scale impact. Nice job and happy writing!

For how wonderfully it was written...truly dislike how it turned the story into such a disgusting tale. Though, if it could do that, that says something in itself. Well done.

This is an amazing piece! I really like how much you changed it and the perspective in which it was told. Have you thought about looking into other/older versions of Cinderella?

pure genius . i loved it .

Wow. A story about cinderella! Nice job, I loved it! It was so amazing, i and I loved the ending! You really good at one-shots!

Chilling, but skillfully crafted.

That was a strange, twisted story. Not twisted like disturbing, but twisted as in it's very different from Cinderella. It was very well written, but I can't say it was very happy. lol.

That was well written and well thought out! I liked it a lot!
Keep it up!

Oh wow. Simply, wow. It nearly made me cry.

So sad! You've managed to show how easily people can be led to believe something and not know it's wrong...this sent shivers up my spine.
I like the way events are repeated in this. Very effective.
-Amy

Definitely an interesting piece. I'm curious as to why the mum hated her so much. Haha, nice job.

Wow...that was an excellent twist to the story. Beautiful work. :)

Your interpretation of such a classic tale is simply superb. I think that Cinderella's death is a bit abrupt, but understandable. You have written about her hunger for love beautifully.