|Reviews for Scared of the Dark|
| Violet Thelaw 5/24/09 . chapter 1
Ahh, I love your rhymes. When I try to rhyme, it sounds like a kid's tune.
| Counting Petals 12/13/08 . chapter 1
I loved this. It had a lovely flow to it and the imagery was wonderful.
| Peace Revolution 9/13/08 . chapter 1
i liked this a lot. it flowed really well.
| Eagle Seance 9/11/08 . chapter 1
Lovely. Oh, I forgot to mention that it escaped me that your 9/11 poem was written when you were 9! Wow! And you seem to be very talented at rhyme and rhythm. Lovely last verse.
| DefineBeauty 9/9/08 . chapter 1
Fight for the Freebie review!
aww, i like this one ] its cute! the rhyming works well in most places and the flow is pretty good as well. all in all, this is a great piece!
my favorite part...well, one of them, is in the very first stanza: So scared was I of the darkness inside,
It sometimes stopped me from sleeping.
it's just got a cool sound to it, and it makes you want to read more
and then my other favorite part is in the last stanz: But the coming of dawn and the sunrise still
Is the greater beauty for me.
i love sunrise ]
| MzEatsaLot 9/7/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this poem flows really well and I definitely like the wording of the poem. such as.."And the shadows around me a creeping" I liked almost every line to tell you the truth. It was great!
| fatbird33 8/24/08 . chapter 1
very pretty poem. great word choices, and once again fantastic descriptions
| tonight we bloom 8/20/08 . chapter 1
I love this poem, it's amazing.
I just recently started writing poetry for Fictionpress and I would love for you to read & review some of my poems.
Feedback from a writer like you would mean the world to me!
And once again, great job.
| KDR 8/20/08 . chapter 1
The imagery here is great! I love it! You have done a wonderful job in creating a work of art and something that is beautiful!
| Imperia 8/20/08 . chapter 1
this is very beautiful. i love the imagery and the ending fits perfectly. i love how the first part is of a scared little girl and the second is the exact opposite and one gets the awe inspired feeling. great job!