oh, okay this story has kept me reading yeaterday till 2am and im hooked! gotta updaye soon :) loven it :)

Thank you for writing.
I always look forward to reading
your next chapter. I am glad Alma
is realising she does love Illias.
Can't wait to read what happens with
Sal's return.

How Beautiful that is!

I feel tears this chapter was absolutely beautiful!

I wonder what is going to result after this and if Illias will acknowledge her feelings?!

I have to give you praise involving the writing of this story because it brings up things I never thought about and written very intelligently!

I really, really Love Kale now.

Omigosh! I just love Kale right now!!

I understand what you're going through...I haven't updated in a month at least

Just to tell you, once you're done with this, you should totally publish it. No kidding here. You write magnificently, I get this weird feeling when I'm reading, like I'm feeling what Alma's feeling, its pretty cool.

So, Alma finally found love, eh?

I think this chapter was perfect!

A little idea of what might happen...

They stay together at the end, but I know that is a long shot. haha.

Keep up the wonderful writing :D

that was a beautiful and emotive chapter, the parting words absoloutley stunning! Do they have to part ways though? I can't wait for more!

Great stuf! Update soon

OMG I have to say this may possibly be my favorite chapter so far~.~ I love it~.~

That...

Was really really really good.

I'm off to read the next chapter now.

I hardly have any spare time now, and I have about 50 story alerts in my inbox that I haven't been reading for the past several months. And yet, as soon as I get an update for this, I stop what I'm doing to check it, because this is such a great story, and I love the way you write. So, good job and keep it up :)

A very physiological chapter what with the talk about faith and defining love and such. I'm glad they finally had "alone time" together, it was very sweet. Hope the next chapter will be up shortly.

holy...crackers.

That was really somethin' else.


You do know that I love your writing style, right? I'm trying to remember if there's any part of this story I've ever fell asleep...and nope, I'm coming up blank.

:)

Gee...Alma and Illias. Their whole love saga going on has truly got me conflicted. I am one of those ppl who believes a gal can NEVER fall in love with her...you know. But here Alma did exactly that. A part of me is feeling kinda pleased, and another part is feeling disgusted that I'm feeling pleased. That means, YOU, dear lady, have conflicted me and only GREAT authors can do that.

Smashing job
8D