This is really interesting. I'm not sure what the cell phone people thing is about though? I think you wrote it about all the phony (haha) people today? And I guess they all love cell phones? But at the same time the last verse makes it sounds like you were writing this about someone close to you? Really interesting though, I like it.

I'm usually not a poetry person, but the title of this one caught my eye. I liked the imagery of the second verse, but I think my favorite part was the bridge. "I caught you in the act/Of demanding everything I lacked": for some reason, that really appeals to me.
Sorry for the lame review, I'm not really exactly a poetry expert.

Pwn3d. I love this. Like, a lot.

I mean it. Power to you! (Also, thanks for the self-esteem-boosting comment on my murder poem)