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Reviews For: Characterization Experiment

Unleash the Bats
2008-08-23
ch 1,
brie, I'm your friend, so I'm going to say:
wtf? i'm confuesd...
intensity
2008-08-20
ch 1,
You did a good job in differentiating in attitudes. I do love that you made up the word shouty. Very niice.
I wish my review could be more in depth, but when you have a short snipit like that I am looking for one thing (characterization) but am distracted by trying to figure out the fantasy elements.
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