hey chica, ok the story was great. The last sentence has a whole lot of forshadowing ever. then again the whole story has a lot of forshadowing for a future story. I kinda think that you could've added this story with the last. but that's just me. I'm not gonna kill you... yet. you still have to get the other three stories up before then. but still why do you say that we will kill you during the next story. are you gonna kill the parents? cause you've kinda shifted the main characters from elizabeth and marcus, to their child hope. =) anyways good story. love it and I already have you on auther alert.

At least spell my name right dear!! I was very good, not what I expected at all . . . then I was like YAY!! Happily ever after!

I swear . . . sometimes you are so . . .
Oh and you changed her name again (Elizabeth), make your mind up dearie!
Erm . . . yeah . . .

YOU CHANGED HER NAME AGAIN!
Make your mind up . . .

Hey sorry it took so long for me to review, I lost my internet on my computer. so I love this, but I think you kinda rushed it. She kinda realy didnt' show much of her feelings as much as her mom did. and not to be a picky person by I think that you need to spend more time on detail. and long chapters are not a bad thing. trust me I absolutely love it when I get a long chapter from an auther. it just means that there is more to read. more adventure. more drama.

This an interesting chapter.

First off, great chapter! WOO!
Second off...I have a couple corrections!

The song title is "There's a good reason WHY these tables are numbered honey, you just havent figured it out yet" and therefore the acronym is TAGRWTTANHYJHFIOY. (you just forgot the why)

Next correction: its CITIZENS for our betterment. not civilians!

And yes, it is quite true: I know EVERYTHING about Panic...sad, isn't it?

BYE LIZZA!

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

hey really short can't wait for the next chappie. and I'm starting to really like mary.

Ahh I heart this story so far =D
I found the whole profanities thing that Mary kept saying funny haha
Please post soon!

this was great. keep up the great work and writing.

oh my god. can't wait. I have one question, would you please, get all the chapters up here in one day? I just love the vk series.