holy .

this is by far my favorite so far.

kudos on the title brilliant.

i'm glad i can't pick out my favorite part, because this entire piece is divine.

yay!

-the sunflower.

I'm in a fond way over that third stanza of yours. I like how the imagery is simple to grasp and you have a tasteful way of saying it all.

I like this title. I have no idea how it relates, but I like it. I'm not so wild about the moon simile, being compared to the sun. I think you might be able to make a more captivating comparison there. Also, on the nitpicky side of things "feelins" should either be feelin' or another use of the verb.

I love your ending though. Nice.