I really liked this piece a lot. The dialogue in the poem, it just blew me away.

Now I'm off to read some more of your work.

beautiful.
it's surging with emotion.

I like your style a lot. I love how you made a conversation into a poem, it's very well done. =]

maybe it was both.
heartwarming, and an intricate writ.

this is lovely work, really. to make conversations in a poetic format. well done.

haha shit. this is the stuff i read that makes me wish i wrote it instead.