I'm literally crying. No lies. I loved this story even though you lack capital letters. It's just so great. I love that the two boys have different poetic styles and I don't know why it's so great but it really is.

Thanks.

Aww, yay! That was cute - a bit unrealistic, but still pretty darn cute. =)

I haven't experienced anything this beautiful in a long time. The third chapter hit me like a brick in my stomach. I was talking to a friend at the time, and I kept trying to pull out a stanza to share with her, but I found I couldn't, for two reasons. The first was that I couldn't choose which to give her, and the second was that they all flowed together so well that I'd have to pull out the entire poem. So I just gave her the link and told her to read it.

Um, *stops rambling* I really enjoy this story. I like the different styles of writing, I love love love Justin, and I love love love Brian, and I will be ever-so-happy if you update soon!

So.. when is he going to say it? =)

update update update!
makes my day this does
: D

as always wonderful.

Things seem to be progressing nicely! I hope you update soon. =)

woot woot!!
a new scene!!
you just made my day complete. thank you.
hope you have as much fun writing this as i have enjoyment from reading this fantabulous story.
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I think you could do both. A regular story version would be great, but is this the end of the poetry one?

I love the poetry version. ^^

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I love this writing style, there are so many good books written in poetryprose. It takes a lot of talent to convey as much emotion through poetry as you do while still retaining a storyline, which you do.
Absolutely amazing gorgeous splendiferous.

I love you. (haha)

I can't wait for the next installment.. i feel like i'm gonna cry from this one..

Wow I've just gotten the time to read this and I'ma going to tell you that I LOVE IT! Its different and yet so well put..You give us the story we want and yet still leave such mysteries to keep our mind buzzing and wanting more. Keep up the work! Write more! I must know what happens next.

i've read a bunch of your other stuff and i like this one too! it's really nifty and i am bound to read more. can't wait!

woah. nice job.
you're right it is different. but unique new angle never thought of it this way different. not weird not so sure where you're coming from different.
point being: i really like it and i hope you continue to write so beautifully.

oh posted script: 'brian, oh brian if i didn't like you so much i'd probably hate you.' is so real. exactly how i feel about my boyfriend. : P

I love this! And I also really like the way it's written, it's new and original and I think it's a really cool idea. Keep writing! This is going on my alert list :)

This is cute so far! (I feel like I say that about all your stories.. but it's always true!) And I like the style. =)

I so want to read more. THis is such a sweet and quaint story (poem) so far. Angst, denial, attraction, so wonderful put and illustrated lovely. I love it!