FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| She's A Lovin' Life 2008-09-16 ch 3,  | This story is priceless. I've always had a bit of penchant for superheroes. Okay, more than a bit. She forgets that she fainted on Cliff? Humerous. |
| FunnyFace 2008-09-16 ch 3, | helloes agin. kendall's so funny, i love how oblivious she is to everything, and her backstory makes her very interesting as a character. the toughness versus the innocence. very interesting. |
| koerle 2008-08-29 ch 1,  | Cute beginning of a new story! I am not sure what is new for your style on this story, but that doesn´t keep me from commenting ;) I really like the conversations so far. They give a good backbone to the story. It would be nice to get a little more background info. Things that are not as easily conveyed through conversation. Cliff soundds terribly cute. So he's not the type her physical attraction usually leans to.. that doesn't mean there could be a gem underneath the tall and buff exterior (yum!). I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
| I'm An Addict For Dramatics 2008-08-21 ch 1, | hehe I love that her name is Dizzy overall I thought it was a good start for the story |
| A Reader 2008-08-21 ch 1, | Cliff is funny. He seems so enthusiastic about everything. Like Dizzy, as a matter of fact. Both of them- no. All of the characters seems really nice. You create them well. |
| anon. 2008-08-21 ch 1, | i try to go above "acceptable and lovely," so here's saying that it's more than an "acceptable and lovely" beginning. the end of the chapter is quite funny too. as is the middle- oh, crap. never mind. keep going. please. |