|Reviews for 36|
| simpleplan13 9/3/08 . chapter 1
I like the idea, but I think that first part is screaming for punctuation and less ands to help the flow. I do like the ending though, very different. Powerful piece.
| Zonne 8/21/08 . chapter 1
Honestly, I don't understand.
What is the reference to 36?
I just don't get cutting? but wish I understood.
I did like the way you made this kind of simple - and it did help me understand a little more.
The style was cool because you made it feel like short, sharp, pointed feelings.
good job on that.