I like the idea, but I think that first part is screaming for punctuation and less ands to help the flow. I do like the ending though, very different. Powerful piece.

Honestly, I don't understand.

What is the reference to 36?

I just don't get cutting? but wish I understood.

I did like the way you made this kind of simple - and it did help me understand a little more.

The style was cool because you made it feel like short, sharp, pointed feelings.

good job on that.