|Reviews for falling|
| simpleplan13 9/3/08 . chapter 1
Maybe try using - instead of spacing, that sometimes work to format things. In addition to the formatting being odd (which I know is probably fp) the capitalization was a bit odd with "bottom" and "A Gracious." Also I don't really like the "4 u" That said I like the content, the whole ship thing was unique and nicely done.
| bR0k3N 8/23/08 . chapter 1
while fp is dumb on the formatting, it was still a unique idea and very creative. All while it failed, we can just blame FP for sabatoge. lol