This is very good!
The lines
"No more war!" their final lie,
As they died on peaceful swords"
are well done!

Different, and great. I liked the imagery and the fantasy creatures. When you say the asme thing a lot of ther poeple say (like ending war) in a totally new, creative way, it makes more of an impact.

loved it! there's such feeling in it and I love the irony in it. No more suffering, no more bloodshed, no more death and all this should happen in the war to end all wars. I also loved the message this poem gives us, which is that you can't fight war with war.

Isn't that just the truth. It's a great big circle. "Let's kill people who kill people, to show other people who kill people that killing people is wrong." :) xD Good job on this.

:.When Twilight Fades.: