Nice. This poem has the right combo of imagery and simplicity. Good job. Peace.

I like the alternating repetition of all because of and just. The piece was a bit cliched, but it got the point across very nicely.

wow this is beautiful O.O almost makes me devout again, and i mean that in a REALLY good way.

(yeah i'm not sure what happened to "we are." i think i accidentally uploaded something -_-;_

Aww, cute :) I like it. Good job.

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