you have to seriously update this story its really something! pretty please with a cherry on top :) hope you update soon i liked the part when she smashed her desk lol amazing image

Awh, yay! They are going to work together! THAT makes me happy :) I

Awh, I didn't think it dragged on at all :) I know I'm responding to an old message, but oh well. :D I think it would be adorable if he went to her house or something to win her over. :) Also, I like the Bruce Wayne vibe that Xavier has going on ;)

AH!! Haha, this is going to be such a great love story :) I love these types, they make me all smiley :P

Awh, too cute! I really love how Jade cannot see Xavier, it is all in her judgement of character how she sees him :D I love it!

Hello! Haha, I love this story, it's such an awesome idea that Jade can't see. And I love the name, Xavier Wellington... it sounds sexy :) Anywhom great job, I absolutely loved it and the only suggestion I have is to go back and reread and insert commas. Next chapter, yay!

Wouldn´t everyone want to smash their office like that if their job sucked? Oh yes!

Curious to read more

Again, too short.
If you want to make it more interesting, brainstorm on a few ideas, and read other writers works, you can get inspired by the smallest things believe me

PB

Too short!!

Is all I have to say... ±P

PB

I think the insignias were a great idea. Anyways, I loved the chapter. There were some places in the story that read awkwardly though, you should check that out.

Anyways, I like Xavier and Jade more and more, and am curious to see what Charlie is like

PB

Very interesting beginning,
It was so funny when Xavier said: are you blind?
and she was like: I AM!

Very fluent story which is always a plus for me, and am very anxious to read the next chapter

at least you updated(:
i kinda like this chapter;
so update son-

Sounds good.
Jade sounds strong. Go strong girls!

Glad she is finally making a choice for herself!!
thanks for updating!!

i really liked this chapter and i hope you post the next CHAPTER