I love how you portray each character! More please :)

Haha, this reminds me of high school and how everyone talked and thought about :) I love this story!

The narration is funny and interesting :)

I love the prologue, it just drags me into the story as a reader :)

Okay, first of all I'd like to say that this story is really good, and just plain hilarious in some parts. That being said, there is one thing I have a problem with. I think you should have your narrator focus more on the story about the 4 girls, you keep on going off-topic which interupts the flow of your story. She can make a couple of interruptions, to make herself known, but I think you should stay in the here and now of the story. Anyways, I really like this story and I'll be waiting for your next chapters.
:) ~Dark Rose

Wow. So first, can I just say your tone is one of the most satirical I've read in a long time? Very scathing--it had me smiling the whole time, and I would've laughed too, but my mom's asleep, so maybe not a good idea. Anyway, onto the review.

First, a few suggestions for editing. Fourteen-year-olds are not typically sophomores, unless they were bumped up a grade, so I would maybe clear that up. Your paragraphs were a bit long, which can be hard to read, but really you can't change that, since they're all talking about one topic. Did that make sense? Sorry, it's late, I'm a bit loopy. Just in the future, be sure to break paragraphs up. The last things are just typos--"gecko" should be "get-go," unless I've been using the wrong term for a while. And when talking about the cafeteria (which was one of my favorite paragraphs), you said "severing" instead of "serving," or something of the sort. Sorry, major grammar Nazi. I'm the nerd who won the school spelling bee in grade school :D

Good things time! Again, I liked your tone, but it did make me wonder if you had a bad school experience. Or maybe I'm just spoiled--my school isn't that bad...all girls and all that. I was very impressed--by the beginning summary, I was expecting a full-on Mary Sue OMG everyone LOVES ME and my life is FABULOUS! type. Thank you for proving me wrong. I look forward to reading more! You have been favorited and are an alert! Yay!
Well that's it. Sorry it's so long. I like to rant as much as you, I guess :)
Good job, can't wait for more!
~actress