Aw, that's sad! I'd love to see a continuation where she gets him back somehow. No? Ah well. I tried XD
--Leanne

aw. even though this was short, it was definitely powerful. (: nice.

Oh, this one is heartbreaking, too! I always feel like crying when I listen to that song and now I'll remember this everytime that song comes on. Keep up with the awesome writing!

This was good!! I liked it..:)

Just one question..why did you sign off as strawberry?

I like the alternate ending better, personally...

It's touching...and cute...and horribly sad!

Ugh. If you make me cry again...!

Lol. ^ ^

Hey!
Aw, sad story! It was simply written, which is good, and drew us in. Aw, I felt so sorry for her! I liked the second ending better, I'm not sure why...lol anyway, well done! :D

HC
xx

aw =/ so sad

aw...this is soo cute! but so sad!! *sniff sniff* i'm scared that is going to happen to me! great job though...