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Hope's Demise
2008-08-28
ch 1,
wow. this is really powerful! It's like I can feel it.
Valkin
2008-08-23
ch 1,
It's a feeling like a mirror.

You see yourself in someone, and its so strange. So odd, because it seems so damn familiar, you wonder to yourself who this is. Because you feel that its you, by just reading the words, but its not. It's you, shower. It's not me, but it feels like something I felt before...and just by your words, I tell.

When I've written countless times, mostly all about my heartache for them, I keep no words for anyone else. It's okay if you don't reply. I understand. This is for you to keep, this writing of heart-wrenching clef. I admire it, but keep silent, and just watch.

Keep the light up kid.
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