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| JD Kirkland- Karenai Hana 2008-08-23 ch 1,   | aw, this is a sad poem. it was kind of like a song i was starting to get a bit of rhythm to it, haha, i like this part the most, "have you seen him? Tell him I miss him next to me." because i liked how it repeating and everything. i always like your poems. |
| When Twilight Fades 2008-08-22 ch 1, | This sounds like it could be a song :) "I’d sit in your lap while we shared stories/but now everyone I know loses interest/‘caus all of my best ones included you" |