I missed this one earlier! It's really cute and awesome. I love how he's only able to catch her becaause he wanted to be as fast as her. There might not've been someone that fast in the town if not for her.

Livi

*nods approvingly* Cool. Cute. I like. :]

Oh my, this is an adorable little story ^_^

Aw! So sweet!

But I do feel bad for her, since she's living now and, I guess . . . legally, no longer exhists. Ah well. At least they can run.

That. That was really cute. And though I'm not normally a huge fan of first person, you worked it in a way that kept me interested. I was a bit confused with the sudden "what?!" when he though he had seen a flash of ponytail--not sure how it could be better conveyed though, and I got it after...you know, he said there was a flash of something XD;

I like how she stayed, how the relationship progressed in the beginning and kept on doing so even though we didn't see it (good transition from the first day to the last). And did I mention how amused I am it's rated for the het? XD Makes sense to me!

...funnily enough, I'm in the middle of a story where the MC is a runner. Different storyline and characters of course, but that's just another thing we've both done now. I think at this point I'm part O_o and part amused.