Hmm...is this based off of the TV show "Burn Notice"? Just curious :) I'm adjusting from Fanfiction to fictionpress.

A job well done .

I do not think that 'shoult' is a word, and saying "don't got" is as bad as saying "ain't" and isn't proper English. If you're not going to use proper English, pick another language selection for what your work is written in, please.

Wally

I like the emotional yet controlled tone to this piece. Good job not succumbing to the overdone meter of most poetry. :)

Renfield

i like your formatting, it looks great ]