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| kloun mannequin 2008-10-01 ch 1, | Live in a world of mirrors, touch the paneled glass I like that sentence, the whole poem is a nice and deep reflection. |
| fleur de l'est 2008-09-06 ch 1, | This poem has got a lot of witty, philosophical remarks and all of the stacked of top of each other is like a pile of diamond =) It's almost like a Lisa Miskovsky song! Loved it!! =) ~fleur |
| brokencrystal7 2008-08-22 ch 1, | i like it! ^-^ my favorite line was "lows and highs are common but it takes hitting bottom to find a place" i dont know i just felt like i could relate to that line. anyways i knew that you were going to make a great poem. great job! |