Oh, it's lovely. Is it really only a one-shot? I'm curious to read more; she sounds like a wonderful character. Easy to relate to.

I'm glad that you are writing for this site again. Not really sure what I think of this...it seems like if you chose to continue with it, it could become something good. As a draft used to get back into the swing of things writing-wise, it's not bad. Even in this unfinished state it is 10 times better than a lot of the stuff one finds on this site.

Aw, I liked this. I wish there was more, but it's a very solid piece on its own. Great job! I hope to see more from ya soon :)
Faith

I really enjoyed this and would love to see it turned into a full-length story, but it stands just as well on its own. Wonderful job!

mm, you should totally turn this into a story. maybe revise this a little. but it's really good, really solid stuff.

nice, as in good nice, gimme more. ilike your writing.