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| Creative Jenius 2008-08-23 ch 4,   | I like your poetry, because I feel I can somewhat relate. My favorite poems were the last two. I really like "Forgive." because of the last few lines, that universal feeling... wanting not to care, but being unable to help yourself.. "I don't care... I do care. I hate that." And "Phone." Well, I feel exactly the same way. The phone rarely rings for me either, and when it does, I have little to say. Very simple, honest poems. Nice job! Katie |