 YourFavoritePoison 2009-07-31 . chapter 5Kewlbeans =] |
 leonsgriever69 2009-01-19 . chapter 4Oh you need to update! Now!
And I'm quite glad you like my attitude :) If I see something I like, I comment on it. That's just how it goes haha
This was another amazing chapter. I'm going to say that it's my favorite so far, and I am really really loving the ghosts. They are just great!
Hmm Sascha at Starbucks, you said? Hm that sounds...weird even for him, but I'm sure you'll make it work. I have great faith in you!
And John...good ole John... 3 WEEKS IN A MINE? And she BOUGHT that? wow...I was laughing at that, which was bad because my roommate is asleep, but it was funny as hell. Yes, yes it was.
Please update soon. Pretty please with sugar and cherries on top?
Oh gee, look, you've got me begging. Dang, you must be good. :)
Awesome job,
Katelyn :) |
 leonsgriever69 2009-01-19 . chapter 3Eh, don't worry about the typos too much. It's not like their going to kill someone. :)
And this was a great installment. I laughed at the ghost's cheeky response, "I'm semi-permeable."
That was brilliant!
This is a great story, I really like it. Great job! |
 leonsgriever69 2009-01-19 . chapter 2Again, I must say how much I love this. Sascha is amazing, and I was surprised that you gave him the identity of a painter, yet it fits him well. Wonderful! I love how he's simply fearless too.
There were a few errors, mainly just words left out, but other than that, great job! |
 leonsgriever69 2009-01-19 . chapter 1I really like this. I was a little cautious at first because I wasn't sure if I would or not, but I really do. And I feel really bad for Sascha, but how old is he? |
 Rakasha Shadowfang 2009-01-19 . chapter 4definitely enjoying this, can't wait until the next chapter |
 KRiiSSY 2009-01-04 . chapter 3This is pretty good soo far =] if you write more i would defiantly be a fellow reader like I was with trick =] |
 Cherice Todd 2008-09-08 . chapter 3 Freakin' awesome, as usual! I can't wait to see what happens to Sasha next! And it was pretty funny to imagine Tanaka wearing a fluffy pink apron and making smiley face breakfasts while wearing such a somber expression! Lol, I look forward to the next chapter! :) |
 BlackDragon of F1R3 2008-09-06 . chapter 3I didn't catch any typos that stand out at least...typos are annoying...more more more please! |
 Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-08-28 . chapter 2oh, this story is gonna be fun
can't wait to read more |
 BlackDragon of F1R3 2008-08-27 . chapter 2weird=fun=good
me likey though the swears seem to get quite extensive... |
 Cherice Todd 2008-08-27 . chapter 2 Hmm. Yea, this story is weird, but I've come to expect that from you. :P Plus, I love weird stories and this is definitely my favorite, next to "Trick." Please keep up the good work! :) |
 Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-08-23 . chapter 1this looks good, certainly interesting, can't wait to see the rest |
 BlackDragon of F1R3 2008-08-23 . chapter 1It's good...keep going! |