It's a damn cool story, just that it was rushed at the end. Stories are never written well if it was rushed. No offence, just a word of advice. Try not the rush any kind of story.

Kewlbeans ]

Oh you need to update! Now!

And I'm quite glad you like my attitude :) If I see something I like, I comment on it. That's just how it goes haha

This was another amazing chapter. I'm going to say that it's my favorite so far, and I am really really loving the ghosts. They are just great!

Hmm Sascha at Starbucks, you said? Hm that sounds...weird even for him, but I'm sure you'll make it work. I have great faith in you!

And John...good ole John... 3 WEEKS IN A MINE? And she BOUGHT that? wow...I was laughing at that, which was bad because my roommate is asleep, but it was funny as hell. Yes, yes it was.

Please update soon. Pretty please with sugar and cherries on top?

Oh gee, look, you've got me begging. Dang, you must be good. :)

Awesome job,

Katelyn :)

Eh, don't worry about the typos too much. It's not like their going to kill someone. :)

And this was a great installment. I laughed at the ghost's cheeky response, "I'm semi-permeable."

That was brilliant!

This is a great story, I really like it. Great job!

Again, I must say how much I love this. Sascha is amazing, and I was surprised that you gave him the identity of a painter, yet it fits him well. Wonderful! I love how he's simply fearless too.

There were a few errors, mainly just words left out, but other than that, great job!

I really like this. I was a little cautious at first because I wasn't sure if I would or not, but I really do. And I feel really bad for Sascha, but how old is he?

definitely enjoying this, can't wait until the next chapter

This is pretty good soo far ] if you write more i would defiantly be a fellow reader like I was with trick ]

Freakin' awesome, as usual! I can't wait to see what happens to Sasha next! And it was pretty funny to imagine Tanaka wearing a fluffy pink apron and making smiley face breakfasts while wearing such a somber expression! Lol, I look forward to the next chapter! :)

I didn't catch any typos that stand out at least...typos are annoying...more more more please!

oh, this story is gonna be fun

can't wait to read more

weirdfungood

me likey though the swears seem to get quite extensive...

Hmm. Yea, this story is weird, but I've come to expect that from you. :P Plus, I love weird stories and this is definitely my favorite, next to "Trick." Please keep up the good work! :)

this looks good, certainly interesting, can't wait to see the rest

It's good...keep going!