adds more insite than the first one. i like it.

I'm definitely liking the rewrite :) i like the style with the flashbacks, they make it easier to relate to why Kris still loves Blake

Hey there. :) In response to your reply, I, too, am starting to feel that maybe the beginning is dragging on a bit, but not in a bad way! ^^ You really are painting a detailed background for this story, and every little incident you describe only stresses their relationship more...I'm just impatient. >

yay! glad that i make you wanna write some more. can't wait for more. i feel so sorry for kris though!! cya later ~ Alenor

he hates that sorta stuff and yet he's become a girlfriend beater himself? what a hypocrite! can't wait for more ~ Alenor

Poor Kris. T_T With every chapter, this seems to get better and better. Or maybe I'm just excited because I already know what happens in Broken. >

hey, can't wait for more ~ Alenor

M, I'm greedy for more. ;) You really have an amazing way of dragging the reader into the story. I was breathless towards the end. >< Nicely done.

hm...interesting. can't wait for more ~ Alenor

I absolutely adore how you're combining these two stories into one super amazing one. >< Great job! Keep up the awesomeness!