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Reviews For: Tomato Soup & You

MissMei92
2008-11-16
ch 1,
Deb, you have improved BY MILES more than the last time I read something you wrote!

Like, seriously, this is future author material, and don't you doubt it for a second. I absolutely love this! (Despite the dying part... I always hate those.)

Anyway, job well done. :D
rissy
2008-10-27
ch 1,
nice story. fellow writer of josie's xD

really. i'm a sucker for tragic stuff. anyway, awesome work =D
angelx18
2008-10-27
ch 1,
Lol, this review is long overdue but I feel compelled to write one.

It's nice and short. Bittersweet really. Kinda reminds me of A Walk to Remember though. But I likey. Wasn't eying any grammatical errors so yeah.

Update your other stories lah.
ADarkerShadow
2008-08-24
ch 1,
Aw! Cute but sad!
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