This was really good. I loved the imagery and details in this. one thing that threw me off was

"But then the frightful noises

ring through the clearing"

it didnt seem to flow too well and i had to read it a few times to make it an easy transistion...if that makes sense lol

but besides that one part i really liked it!

~silent

This was nice and clear
Now return the favor from all my reviews and review some of my poetry please
thanks

wow, I really like it ^_^