It was really good, and the whole concept was rather interesting too. (:

this story was breath-taking. i wish it never ended! beautiful!

So your sister wrote this? :D It's good. Make's me think of a line from the song Duality, by Slipknot. "Theres a fine line between love and hate." :D

Wow, that was just... so sweet!

I loved it.

It's been a long time since I've read a story in fictionpress and I'm really glad that it's this story that I was able to read after being away for a long time from this site

I just woke up when we chatted but this story definitely made me fully awake! I totally love it Especially, the way Brad had mistook his feelings of crush for hate

I pitied Max's character he seems to be labeled as a loser/ emo by his classmates .. but most of all, he still ended up with Brad in the end _

gosh, isn't this comment long or what? XD Hahahaha!

Very cute story. (:

I've mistaken love for hate before...stupid me...XD

But anyways, it's lovely. _

I love it!

It is so simple and yet has just all the emotion needed so we are able to understand that Brad is so in love and not in hate with Max. And quite early in the story,too.

And it's so fun watching Brad squirm trying to figure out how he feels :)

And yeah that does happen-people mistaking love for hate,or just being plain pissed off with someone with no obvious reason...when they're actually in love with them...

What to say?

Humans are weird creatures ;)

Really, awesome. You're an incredible writer

I agree with you on the hate really being love thing. The story was very appealing. Thanks for posting it.